I knew when I read [He started tapping his fingers on the covers on his bed. It didn’t make much sound, but it was enough to make the professor turn red] this was going to be an interesting one. I love it that Pomfrey thinks they can entertain each other. I have a question...who wins the chess match? Sorry, can't help myself. Oh this is going to be good, chapter 9, and I always think my look-ahead is good and you always surprise me. Perhaps we should have a game of wizard chess! [“You breathe too loudly,” Snape snorted.] reminds me of Filch after his cat was petrified n CoS, putting students in detention for "breathing loudly" and "looking happy". You have exactly JKR's sense of humour there. Well written too...If I go on in this vein it will be sheer flattering nonsense, but it would be VALID flattering nonsense. :D Kat
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Date: 2009-07-03 11:47 pm (UTC)I have a question...who wins the chess match? Sorry, can't help myself. Oh this is going to be good, chapter 9, and I always think my look-ahead is good and you always surprise me. Perhaps we should have a game of wizard chess!
[“You breathe too loudly,” Snape snorted.] reminds me of Filch after his cat was petrified n CoS, putting students in detention for "breathing loudly" and "looking happy". You have exactly JKR's sense of humour there.
Well written too...If I go on in this vein it will be sheer flattering nonsense, but it would be VALID flattering nonsense. :D Kat