Date: 2010-12-05 01:02 am (UTC)
LONG-ARSE COMMENT.

[Ok, I'm only halfway through the fic, but I needed to start the comment.]
Lupiiiiiiiiiiin. I want to squish him so badly right now. SNAPE WHY ARE YOU BEING SO MEAN HE'S TRYING TO APOLOGISE AND IT REALLY WASN'T HIS IDEA!

And Lupin is willing to focus on the assignment for you, Snape. Come on come on excellent, you forgave him. I love the fact that Lupin's reaction is, "Yes! *glomp*"

“What are you doing, Lupin?” Severus stopped abruptly. “Why are you following me?” Because he luuuuuuuurves you!

He wouldn't want Lupin to think he had any right to become friendly with him. I actually, audibly, went "awwww, Snape! D:".

So Lupin's using Snape's words to degrade himself/cheer himself up. Iiiiiiiiinteresting.
Haha, Lupin using the Marauder's Map to stalk Snape. XD

[As their lips toucheD]

Another "aww" when Snape refused Lupin after the kiss. And the fact that Snape's feeling guilty makes me slightly happy.
And he's looking for Lupin because he's so used to having him around. Come on Snape, you miss him, just confess. We understand. ;)

YAY happy ending! :D I like happy endings. Now all Snape has to do is convince himself the "fleabag" is worth dating... <3


Awesome story, my dear! Loved reading it.
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