WOW. That was really EXCELLENT. There are a few gaps in reason but I quite enjoy that. I love that Tobias wasn't an abusive arse. I love Severus being convinced that "Remus" is alive, then abandoning the idea, then morphing into Lupin. Hehehehe.
I love that Severus couldn't cry about his father, just staring at the wall, most of all, but you know me, I am a sucker for angst.
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Date: 2010-09-26 06:06 pm (UTC)I love that Severus couldn't cry about his father, just staring at the wall, most of all, but you know me, I am a sucker for angst.