Nice job changing "Hermione Granger shed him what was obviously the most unpleasant look she could muster"...it is a good combination of the two writing styles. I am honoured that you thought my words well worth using. PS if you like sci-fi there's a story up, but it's not anything like Rowling's world, so if you feel like skipping it, no skin off my nose. Kat
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Date: 2009-06-09 05:18 pm (UTC)PS if you like sci-fi there's a story up, but it's not anything like Rowling's world, so if you feel like skipping it, no skin off my nose.
Kat