Miss Invisible - chapter 9 (last chapter)

[snapealina]

Miss Invisible

 

 

 

a Harry Potter fanfic

Pairing: Severus Snape/OFC
Rating: Mature
Genre: Romance

Summary: After a dream, Amanda, a Gryffindor sixth year, gets a little obsessed with a certain Potions Master. And she'll do anything to have him.

A bit AU with Snape still being the Potions Master.

Disclaimer: I only own Amanda, the rest of the characters belong to JKR!
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Chapter 9

Amanda was happy. She was lying in Severus Snape’s bed, both completely naked, just kissing and caressing each other. She was in his arms, and felt his fingers run through her hair. It was one of the most wonderful feelings she had ever experienced. A grin appeared on her face. She could think of one feeling that was even better, though…

She wished she could stay like this forever, but she knew that she already had been there for a while, and that she ought to get out of there before the charm wore off. “Just a little longer,” she thought. “I can’t leave just yet!”

Her eyes caught his, and she saw that he was smiling too. It had really been a successful evening. She kissed him and tightened her arms around him. He kissed her forehead and said with a little chuckle in his voice: “So, you’re a blonde.” Amanda startled. What did he just say? How could he know? Then she saw it. Part of her hair was starting to become visible.

The girl jumped up from the bed, panicking. The charm was wearing off. She needed to get out. But where were her robes? They were still invisible, and somewhere on the floor. She got down and frantically started feeling around for them. But she couldn’t find the robes anywhere. She just had to run for it.

Amanda picked up her wand, and hurried out of his bedroom and through his office, noticing that her hands were beginning to show as well. She threw herself into the nearest bathroom, and into one of the stalls. Panting, she lifted the charm on herself, standing in the stall completely naked. Then she drew her breath, concentrated really hard and cast the spell again. She watched herself disappear, and her breath calmed down.

What about her robes? She needed to get them back. But dared she go back to him now? He had seen her hair, and Merlin knows if some other part of her body showed too. But she needed her robes. She couldn’t go back to Gryffindor tower naked. Even if she was invisible, someone might notice someone coming through the portrait hole, or her roommates were bound to react if someone they couldn’t see came into the dorm and started looking around for clothes.

She decided to go back to him. She was at least invisible again, and had bought herself a bit more time. She walked carefully through the corridor and towards his office, just dodging three Slytherin fifth year boys. She waited until they had disappeared behind a corner before she slipped through Snape’s office door.

Amanda walked soundlessly to his bedroom door, and peered through. There, stood a naked Snape in the middle of the room, holding her black school robes. Amanda gulped. Then he turned to her, stretched out his hand holding the robes. “I assume you want this back.” He smiled. Amanda took the robe and put it on. Snape laughed. “Now, that is a weird look.”

Amanda looked at herself and started giggling too. All Snape saw was probably a pair of Hogwarts robes floating in the middle of the room. “So you’re a blonde, Gryffindor girl.” Snape said wonderingly. Amanda became nervous. The badge on her robes had exposed even more of her identity. He had found out that she was a Gryffindor. She needed to get away before he found out anything else.

She walked up to him, kissed him and whispered: “Thank you” Then she rushed out of his bedroom and out in the corridor. All of a sudden she remembered that her body was invisible, but her clothes were not, so she ran to the bathroom and lifted the charm completely. Then she headed back to Gryffindor common room, both happy and a little anxious by tonight’s adventure.

The following week seemed to last forever. Amanda didn’t dare to go back to the dungeons, although her body ached to feel him near her again. The Potions lessons were becoming almost unbearable.

She watched Snape walk around the classroom and all she wanted to do was jump up from her desk and kiss him. He obviously hadn’t found out it was her yet, because he completely ignored her like he always had. But every time he walked past her in the classroom and his robes brushed against her, she felt her body shiver with excitement and longing, and she immediately forgave him for ignoring her.

The school year was coming to an end, and Amanda only had one exam left: Her practical Potions exam. She dreaded this exam most of all. Usually she didn’t mind Potions. It was one of her best subjects. But being almost alone with Snape, and focusing on Potions, would be a great challenge this time.

She sat in the corridor outside the Potions classroom along with the rest of her classmates. Hermione was in there now, Amanda was up next. She was nervous. Of course Hermione would get an “O”, she always did, and now Amanda was right after her. She’d probably have to impress Snape and the examiner even more to get a grade that good.

Hermione came out of the classroom with a big grin on her face. Amanda was not surprised. “Amanda Greene” she heard Snape call from the classroom. She swallowed a big lump in her throat, closed her eyes and drew a deep breath. “Calm down, Amanda,” she said to herself. “You know this stuff. Just pretend he’s someone else. Someone you don’t know.” She got up, and walked into the classroom.

Behind the desk sat Snape and an old witch she had never seen before. “Sit down, Miss Greene,” Snape said coldly. She obeyed. The old witch smiled at her. ”Nervous?” she asked kindly. Amanda nodded. “Well, it’s nothing to be worried about,” the witch continued. “From what professor Snape has told me about you, you will have no problem with this task. He claims that you’re very talented in Potions” Amanda looked puzzled. Had Snape said that about her? Had he really noticed? She smiled cautiously. ”Thanks,” she said.

”So, Miss Greene,” Snape asked. “Could you please brew an ageing potion for us, and feed it to the niffler in the box beside you?” Amanda nodded, and started working. She had made this potion before, and it had gone really well.

This was actually going her way. All she needed to do was to stay focused on the potion, and not look up at her professor. She concentrated as hard as she had never concentrated before, and half an hour later she had finished. She fed the potion to the niffler, which immediately became grey and looked scruffier.

Snape and the witch whispered amongst themselves, looking at Amanda from time to time. Snape nodded and the witch turned to Amanda, who still was sitting nervously in her chair. “Congratulations, Miss Greene, you have achieved an Outstanding in potion-making.” Amanda sighed loudly with relief, and saw Snape freeze.

Snape sprung up from his desk and pointed at her. ”You!” Amanda froze. “It’s you!” Snape looked at her with a shocked expression on his face. The witch looked confused. “What are you talking about, professor Snape?” she asked him. But Snape didn’t say a word. He just stared at Amanda. Amanda’s cheeks turned red. She quickly picked up her things, nodded courteously to the witch and said: ”Thank you so much.” Then she rushed out of the classroom.

She didn’t even notice that Parvati tried to ask her how the exam went. She ran through the corridor, up all the flight of stairs and up to her dorm. She threw herself on the bed and burst into tears. He had found out. And he looked mad. Her life was over!

Amanda Greene didn’t really feel like going to the end of year feast that evening, but Parvati, Lavender and Hermione wouldn’t budge. They thought that her Potions exam had gone really bad and that she needed to be cheered up. She couldn’t tell them what really happened, and therefore had no excuse not to go down to the Great Hall.

She went down with them, and sat next to them at the Gryffindor table. Dumbledore said a few words, but she didn’t really listen. The food appeared on the table, and she grabbed some chicken and mashed potatoes. But she couldn’t eat. She just sat there playing with her food, her mind on the dreadful episode at the end of her Potions exam. “It’s not the end of the world,” Hermione patted her on the shoulder. Amanda stood up and yelled at her. “What the hell do you know about that?” then she turned around and ran out of the great hall.

In the corridor she fell to the floor and started crying again. What had she done? She just wanted to curl up and die. Luckily this was the last day, and they were all going home tomorrow morning. She did not want to be around anyone at the moment. She got to her feet, and started walking towards Gryffindor tower.

The sound of rapid steps was behind her, and she turned around to see who it was. It was Snape coming towards her in a brisk tempo. She panicked. What was she going to do now? She didn’t have time to come up with any plan at all, and no time to run away. He came up to her, grabbed her arm and dragged her behind a corner.

He embraced his strong arms around her, and gave her the most passionate kiss in the world. It seemed to last for an hour. Then abruptly, it was over. “See you next year, Miss Invisible,” he winked at her. Snape turned on his heel, and walked back to the Great Hall, leaving Amanda alone, relieved but slightly bewildered. “Next year will be very interesting”, she said to herself.

Comments

[reg-flint.livejournal.com]

“I assume you want this back.” He smiled. Amanda took the robe and put it on. Snape laughed. “Now, that is a weird look.” [that is the strangest reaction on part of Severus. I can't picture it, he must REALLY be happy!]

Snape turned on his heal, and walked back to the great hall It's heel and Great Hall should be in caps.

Hee hee I loved the ending. This seems nothing like Snape, yet somehow every bit like him. I love it that she was given away by her sigh. Something Snape would have noticed for sure. I loved the way you captured Amanda's desperation at being almost caught, then caught.

I have a few new fics out, a Severus one and a Lily one. Feel free to leave comments or derogatory statements (jk) :D TOO BAD IT"S OVER! :( booo hooo hooo.
It was great while it lasted. Whatever else you post, especially Snape stuff, I would enjoy reading. You're quite a good writer!! Sometimes great! (Lift your head up high for your moment in the sun!!!)

Kat

[snapealina.livejournal.com]

omg, I just can't seem to get some words right. I keep starrrrrring at my heal :) lol

And of course Snape is happy, he just got some... lol ;)

Anyway, thanks for sticking with this fic. It's been really interesting getting this much feedback. I've really appreciated it. Some people have begged me for a sequel, but I still haven't made up my mind about that one yet. It's only silly ideas that comes into my head if I decide to go through with that. But we'll see...

I have written a Snape/Ron fic also. It's not a slash-fic, more general and hurt/comfort-fic, and I have considered reposting it here, but I really should edit it a bit/a lot before I do post it...

Thanks for the compliment :) *enjoying my moment*

[reg-flint.livejournal.com]

Enjoy that moment...that really was a great bit of fanfic. I enjoyed every minute of it...it didn't take long to capture me as an audience, partially because I read almost anything with Severus in it, but also cause you put your hooks in well, right in Ch 1.
Good job! (yes you can inflate your head now----jk) ;)
Kat

[reg-flint.livejournal.com]

Do you remember that awkward philosophical statement in my fanfic? It boils down to this: Severus is musing on the nature of his existence as a dark force and what the cause of that dark force is. He sees happiness as "two-dimensional light" (narrow and limited). He sees himself as one of his own worst enemies. And he seems powerless to stop it.
Kat
;X <- Severus scowl (my fic) ;D Severus glee (your fic)